Thursday 23 March 2017

Grizzly maze

Grizzly maze One day i was out in the woods.I heard rumours about a grizzly. When it stood up on its back paws it was 8 foot tall. It could kill a man with one swipe.I set out into the woods with my assistant. I am a sheriff. I am going to find my friend rick. And i’m worried he might get his foot caught in one of the traps. and then bear killing him so i’m going to ascend into the wood’s. i’m in the woods i can hear a twig snap behind me. then finn and rob came out of the bush. Then they said they came out to help out. i hear a horse nahh then we ran to wear we heard the horse then rob gets hit by a horse then we see that rick is dead the bear had ripped his head off and left the bloody body there to rot then we kept moving to the shoor then rob looked back and seen the bear and slipped on the edge of the hill and barrel rolled and his leg got persed by a branch then i heard the bear rummaging through the ground then finn said we aren't safe here the bear would be able to smell the fresh blood so let's keep moving me and finn had to kary rob most of the way then we finally got to the beach then there the bear was he had stalked us then rick came running out of the bush with his gun and one ear in tatters then he shot the bear in the but and then the bear crunched his face and then he was dead then the bear turned back to us then the bear clobbered the lifeboat me and finn ran around the bear with gas and then we lit it on fire that would hold him for a tiny bit then the bear jumps straight over the fire and lands on rob. I bear in the back then the bear kills rob then the bear pins rob to the ground and then rob stabes the bear in the neck and then blood is gushing out like a waterfall and then the bear drops to the ground with a bang. Then we all relax the bear is dead.

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