Friday 5 August 2016

Hide and seek

Hide and seek





I am running I stop I keep going what was that crunch it was a leaf a cross the other side of the paddock. I see cooper in the distance I jump the fence then go and hide out the front. I found out that it was hide and seek tag. I looked at his hand and seen a nerf gun and he cornered me. I felt like a mouse had got cornered by a snake. Then I sprinted like a hair up the little track going up the side of my house. I felt like it was a trap because he wasn’t following me so I turned around cautiously I hear a twig snap he's coming. I try to be as stealthy as I can be. There was a CRUNCH. I held my breath it wasn’t Cooper luckily I saw my cat . It was creeping around trying to be stealthy but seriously I was relieved it was just the cat.      

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