Friday 5 August 2016

My monday morning

Walt:showing us our monday morning
On monday morning I was all cosy in bed till mum woke me up and then turned the light on the. I got annoyed and I really didn't want to go to school today. I did anyway. The frost was as thick as ice since it was raining last night which made it worse. I knew that mum was going to make me walk. when I left I felt like a sheep that had just had it’s wool cut off. So I went back and grabbed my jacket then I walked to school
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1 comment:

  1. Unknown20 September 2016 at 21:14

    Ki Ora Jack!
    This is a very good piece of writing with some good sentences describing how you felt. Next time you could think about trying to change some of your full stops to commas to extend the sentences a bit.
    All together this was a great piece. Keep it up!

    Bronah - GMS

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